Short and sweet, this little self published novel for middle grade readers had good bones, but could definitely have used an editor. It was riddled with spelling and grammatical errors, the formatting was weird, and the homemade drawings were very... amateur. That being said, I think it's an enjoyable story about a young girl and the magical Christmas she spent with her family in Key West. It's easy to read, sweet, and fun. Again, I think the story has potential, it just needs some more TLC. I do believe this is also part of a series.
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